Milked Double Daddy Pregnancy (Mini-Review)

This review was written for an ARC of the book.

Milked Double Daddy Pregnancy by e.j.layne is a short story about Cassandra and Dean Phillips having trouble with having a child. This due to the fact that the husband had gotten into an accident that greatly decreased the likelihood of getting his wife pregnant. With no other options, the pair decide to have their mutual friend Nevin make love to Cassandra so that she can get pregnant.

Cassandra turns out to be very conservative when it comes to sex. She doesn't like anything dirty and kinky. Which means, of course, that over the course of this short story she has a sexual awakening of sorts. This is a nice 'character arc' for her to have since it means when the kinkiness comes that it's that much better. Though one sexual act she performs once she opens up is...the story makes it seem as though the only reason she didn't perform that act was because she was too nervous. Instead of a whole list of health concerns that meant everyone involved would have to shower before performing it.

One of the most important things, at least to me, when having a story involving two guys is that each has to be different. It's no fun if it's basically a copy and paste with each one. That due to the fact that having more than one guy involved means variety. And with no variety there's no real point to having multiple guys. Dean and Nevin are just different enough to be interesting. Dean is the loving husband who just wants the best for his wife while Nevin doesn't want to settle down. This makes it so that both approach having sex with Cassandra differently.

The main problem I had with this story was the fact that the word and phrase choices are off at times. They were so bad to the point there were numerous times I had to stop. I hate saying this because the setup for the sex and the sex itself are well done for the most part. It's just that the author seems to try too hard to choose different words so they don't repeat themselves. Also, using breed as a synonym for sex does not work in the context of this erotic short.

I would recommend Milked Double Daddy Pregnancy by e.j.layne to those looking for an erotic short.